For Mrs.McGaugheys class
Thank you for reading my letter in this WeVideo I will give a little more ideas for your park that I think would be a great addition to your park! So i thought that if you put the water rides closer together you could maybe add some more rides because to me I don't think there is that many and there needs to be more this just might increase popularity in the spring and summer time
The last time I saw your park it didn't look like you have painted it in a while. In addition to your park I think that it would be a GREAT idea for you guys to put a fresh layer of paint on your park. With a new layer of paint your park will look nice and new!!!!!!!
One last topic that I would like to ask you change the look of you mascot because he's kind of creepy. I know that I wouldn't like to be around it so what i recommend is changing the suits out for less creepy ones. I mean you can keep the whole idea of the characters but change the outfits out.
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