This is what i think the McNab house would look like.
" Cans and bottles lay all over, along with crust, peelings, cores, scrapes, rinse, wrappers - everything you would find in a garbage can. And everywhere there were raisins."
"The hole in the ceiling was so big that they both could have jumped through it at once."
"A jar of peanut butter had crashed on the floor;someone had gotten a running start, jumped into it, and skied a brown one footed track on the stove."
"Despite the cold, the front door was wide open, and maniac could smell the inside before he could see it."
"He ran a hand along one wall. The peeling paint came off like corn flakes."
"Scene: Small turds of an unfamiliar shape appear here and there along the base boards of the first floor."
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