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A father and son go on an every day hiking trip when things turn around and life and death situations lead to love and determination.

Storyboard Text

  • Robert and Elian are in the Rocky Mountains hiking watching this beautiful view ready to go back.
  • Yes, Ido.
  • You see that son, that right there is unforgettable.
  • Dad, I have something to tell you. Mom has been abusing me...
  • Elian begins to ask questions that have been on his mind since his parents got divorced and Robert just answers with sentences that try to push those feelings out of the way. But this subject stays on Robert's mind.
  • Well Elian, what about you mom?
  • Dad, why can't I just stay with you and we can move to Los Angeles
  • Robert and Elian spot a large 7 foot black bear from the distance all alone but they don't even dare to approach it when it starts to come toward them. The bear then stays there around 10 feet away from them and they dart to walk back slowly.
  • The bear begins to crawl closer and every step it goes faster and faster and Elian begins to confess things to his dad that his mom leaves the house every night to go party and she comes around midnight and abuses him because by the time she comes back, she's drunk. Robert gets enraged by this and distracts the bear while praying to get out of this horrifying situation.
  • WHAT?! That is it!! I am finished with your mother!
  • The bear jumps at Robert and bites his arm off while Elian looks for some kind of weapon. Terrified and sobbing, he finds a spear that was right next to him and he throws it as hard as he can at the bear and it cuts through his skull. He then throws himself at his dad and calls for help. Around ten minutes later, the helicopter comes and picks them up and they go to the nearest hospital.
  • It hurts SO MUCH!
  • Stay awake Robert! STAY AWAKE!!
  • Emergency Helicopter
  • In the helicopter, the doctors told Robert that he is going to live and that they are going to attach a bionic arm to him. Elian was crying the whole time thinking he will have to live with his mom forever
  • AAAHHH!!!
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