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  • Ms. McKinnon gives verbal and written feedback to Shamiya.
  • Great introduction to our essay Tim. I can tell you have done a lot of brainstorming and time into this rough draft.
  • Wow really, thanks for noticing!
  • ESSAY PAPERS DUE MONDAY ROUGH DRAFT REVIEW- TODAY
  • Ms. McKinnon knows how important it is to acklowedge and highlight the great parts of Shamiyas rough draft. This will motivate Shamiya to continue to work hard for her final copy.
  • Your main idea along with supportive facts are all on point along with your speaking and punctuation. Per our rubric you are on your way to a great grade.
  • It makes me feel good that Ms. McKinnon noticed my hard working efforts
  • ESSAY PAPERS DUE MONDAY ROUGH DRAFT REVIEW- TODAY
  • Ms. McKinnon sets high expectations by giving feedback on references that Shamiya might be lacking. Ms.McKinnon voices her concern and Shamiya is appreciative for the hand back and will correct for the final copy.
  • Some of your sources don't seem to be cited. I would go back and revise before turning in your final copy.
  • Thank you for the feedback, I will review and correct before final submission.
  • ESSAY PAPERS DUE MONDAY ROUGH DRAFT REVIEW- TODAY
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