This Way Up Corey


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  • When Corey got home he swung his bag on the bench, got a feed and a drink, and hopped on the computer.
  • ''Potts walked in and pulled at Corey's elbow.'' 'That's my place!' he hissed in Corey's ear.
  • At the beginning of the story, Corey is lazy, always eating and is very overweight.
  • Corey is always on his computer playing Counter Strike. He was on it so much that his mother had to force him to play a sport, if he wanted her to pay for the broadband.
  • Corey gets ignored and bullied at school and has trouble making friends.
  • Corey hunched over on all fours gasping for air.
  • 'For god's sake,' Potts yelled, 'spike the finish!'
  • Later in the story, he starts doing orienteering to get fit but does not like it. He was going to quit, but the team needed a runner for the relays.
  • Corey took a shortcut through a gully he saw on the map which meant he caught up time on Westridge school.
  • At the end of a brutal race, the times are tight between Corey's school Sandy Bay High and their rivals Westridge High. These antics have also won him the Hell Man Award.
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