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  • It is a letter from your Dad. He wanted you to read it on your 12th birthday.
  • Wow Mum thanks for a Hamster! But what is this?
  • Well what could possibly be inside? Should I open it, hmmm. Ok, fine, I will, but I need to keep it a secret...
  • No way can my Dad have built the first time machine! Thats crazy! I just need a bit of evidence, and then I could be the first boy to have a time machine!
  • It is the morning of Al Chaudhury's birthday. Steve (Mums second husband) is arguing with his daughter Carly, But Mum has a letter from Al's Dad who died 4 years ago...
  • I will leave home at midnight and then, "borrow" Grandpa's mobility scooter to drive down to the house 5 miles away...
  • Later that night, Al thinks about the letter. Al thinks, well he has not been alive for four years so he must of planned something for me in the future. After a long debate with himself, Al opens up the letter...
  • Well, good finally I'm in here. What is that tub and computer? That cannot be the time machine? They look useless, how does it work?
  • The next day Al is thinking about what the letter told him. Al wonders if it can really be true? The only way Al can prove it is if he goes back to their old house and breaks in to the garage
  • Oh I pray that mum doesn't wake up. I will be dead meat. Tomorrow, I will head back to the garage, after school and test out the, "Magnificent"thing...
  • Al cannot concentrate during class. He spends the whole day of school thinking up an amazing plan of how to break into his old garage.
  • That night Al sneaks into his old garage through a hole in the floor, he enters a bunker like his Dad told him to. Al stares around at the grim bunker, he is disgusted! But there sitting in the middle of the room is an old laptop and a large tub...
  • Later Al sneaks back into his current house, trying to stay as quiet as he can so he does not wake anyone up.
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