"Excellent, excellent. What does this say to you?"
"Sore throat? Don't worry, it's going around. Want me to tell you what I see?"
Mr.Freeman almost faints with delight. *Pans camera shot*
"I see a girl caught in the remains of a holiday gone bad,with her flesh picked off day after day as the carcass dries out. The knife and fork are obviously middle-class sensibilities. The palm tree is a nice touch. A broken dream, perhaps? Plastic honeymoon, deserted island? Oh, if you put it in a slice of pumpkin pie, it could be a deserted island!"
Darn. I didn't know there would be a quiz. I clear my throat. I can't get any words out, it is too dry. I try again, with a little cough. -> (Melinda's thoughts) *Close up camera shot*
I nod in relief. -> (Melinda) *Camera focuses on the two characters and the art piece*
"It's scary, in a weird way. Not clown scary, um, how do I say this? Like, you don't want to look at it too long. Good job, Mel."
*Close up camera shot*
I laugh in spite of myself. I'm getting the hang of this.
That's not the reaction I was hoping for, but I guess it was positive. She could have turned her nose up, or ignored me, but she didn't. *Camera focuses on the two characters, medium shot*
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