This is the beginning of my mini-documentary. I am on a paddle board and my friend from camp is on it too. We paddled pretty far until we were in line with the boat dock. I will most likely try to remake this frame by doing a real-life remake of this.
This is the second frame for my storyboard. This is the scene when I fall off of the paddleboard. I will try to show my pain by screaming when I fall off and screaming for the lifeguards really loudly. I will use an interview for my filmic technique in this scene.
This scene will be about the actual injury. This will be 'hollywooditised' the most because it is going to be the most dramatic scene. I will use red food colouring in the water to show the blood from the clam. I will use close-ups and long shots.
In this scene, I am screaming for the lifeguard and am out of shock and notice that my foot is gushing out blood. I start screaming over and over again and scream at my friend to start paddling and she start swimming me to the dock.
The lifeguard dives into the lake and starts pulling the paddleboard towards the dock while I lie on the paddleboard with my bleeding foot in my hand. There are lots of other frantic lifeguards and people waiting to see what happened and what the damage was on my foot. Or just what was happening.