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  • " in a world where  kid are addicted to their phone, toy stores are closing, amusement park are becoming empty because they can't keep up with these modern trends that are going on. With my suggestion we can fix that at knobles...!"
  •  "As a kid i know what i want,  the twister at knobles could be so much better if you make it more "trendy" and add some pzazz"
  • "The first thing that i would changes about the twister is the color situation.  Fun color are more appealing to a kids eye and would be  more of an attraction. The color that you have right now are brown and it makes the coaster look bland or uninteresting what i would do is add bright paint and shinning lights that you can see from a mile away. "                        
  • " next i would make the whole roller coaster go faster.  You should start the rollar coster with a catapult launch.  
  • For instance at Hershey park there is this one ride called the great bear.  Everyone loves this ride and wants to go on it when they come to this very successful amusement park.  They start the ride by accelerated you really fast and people love it.
  • The last thing about the twister that i suggest you should change it the cart and how bumpy the cart is on the ride.  You should defendant make the cart bright neon colors.  The twister is super shaky and that is not all so fun.  If you guys a knobles can, you should make the ride more smooth 
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