well i'm done should we go to the park to talk about it more?
yeah now that I'm looking at it I need to update it.
this is what I needed to talk to you about.
Thank you mr. buissnes man for taking your time for me to talk to you about your park. Well scence I'm here you probobly already know what I'm here to talk about your park. Just to remind you I'm here because of your lazy river. should we go to your park so we could get a visual modle.
thank you so much
I was thinking about putting in new ways to go, different speeds at different times, and different lanes. Right noweveryone goes the same pace and the same place, and that's not really fun.
Afterv a few tweks on this it will be amazing and everyone will wanna come here. What I was thinking just to start out was that we should make the river nicer. Then we can add other things like flowers and bees and statues and fountins and the other ways will ahve to come first but that's just common scence.
now with this nice river you will get a lot of people coming to relax and have fun.
wala it's done.
now people can have fun and not worrie about where their kid is and just rekax with the ways we built this in.
Thank you again for letting me share my idea with you. You won't regret it. Sincerely, Molly T (lab 21 Mrs. McGaughy)