amusement park proposal

amusement park proposal

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  • To Whom it May Concern, Dear, Mr. Matthias Smith
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  • First of all thank you for your time I think you will be very intrested in what I have in mind to change about your park.You do have a great overall park but I beleive I can make it better with my idea’s.
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  • 1 idea is to imrove the outdoor park to match it up with the indoor one.Some ways to do that is imrove the slides,food and attractions could make it a lot better.I belive you should do this because sometimes parents or kids perfer outside sometimes.
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  • Another idea is to improve the hotels that is one of the biggest complaints.your ‘’Free trip’’ is apparently not free and it is not in a nice hotel you need to change that! Also your restaurants in your hotel are not great maybe you could get new ingredients and cooks.With all these your reputation could be a lot better because currently you have a 2.5 stars on yelp.
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  • Another idea is to totally redo your reasurants with a diffrent theme.People seem to not be huge fans of your themes.I also know most of your visiters are children so make it more child theme and i’m sure you could have a successful reasurant
  • Now it is time to focus on cleaner hotels first of all you could really use new utilities because apperntly they are very worn down.You could slightly renovate the rooms just with some new utilite such as counter,cuberts and refridgerator
  •  Sincerely, Nick M & Mrs. McGaughey (Lab 21 Teacher, Oakdale Middle School)
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