I would make this scene more mysterious, like there is something waiting to happen. For example, I want the family to not have any dialogue and just silence besides, I would like to play like suspenseful music. I would also have wind in the background.
Okay! Okay! I wish for henry.
I demand you wish for Henry!
This is the part where the man with the monkey's paw comes in the story. I would make the door slam behind him due to wind (the visitor). I would also, do close ups of their faces when the father wishes for 200 pounds. I would play very dramatic music to make the audience nervous.
Mother, what are you doing!
I forgot the cemetery was two miles away! Oh Henry, i'm coming!
I would make this scene very sad and dramatic. I would make them very upset. I would zoom into everyone's face. I would make the window in the background show that their is rain. I would also play scary and dramatic music.
No! Don't go the door, that thing is dangerous! I wish our son would die!
You are afraid of your own son? Come on! Henry i'm coming!
In this scene, I would play scary and dramatic music. The mother will become very demanding. I would make the father scared and nervous.
In this scene I would zoom into the mother's face. I want the mother to be worried and scared. I would play very dramatic music.
I would make this scene very scary looking. The music in the background would be scary sounding and the characters would look to be in horror. I would zoom into the father as he said his last wish.