ok so you are auditioning for a role on this dog food commercial and we need you to come up with your own slogan and brand name for the dog food we are going to be selling.
ok I understand.
and action!
hungry dog? time to give it dogs! dogs is a great alternative for expensive name brand dog foods that are filled with harmful chemicals and-
CUT!!!
ok so I'm going to have to stop you right there, I think your sentence is a run on. It doesn't give off the message that we are trying to put out
oh is that so? what I was really meant by my slogan was that people should feed their pet dogs\ the brand "dogs"
your slogan sounds like we are encouraging people to feed their pet dog other dogs which is not what we want to advertise
ok I understand
so maybe when writing your script for this advertisement, put a comma after "hungry dog?" to get the right point across
