A girl sent her teacher an email that was improper, so the teacher teaches her how to write a proper email.
I saw that email you sent me!
So what about it?
Well, first of all, you didn't have #1 who you are sending it to. Next, you didn't have #2 the greeting/opening sentence. After that, you didn't have #3 the body/middle question/climax. Then, you didn't have #4 the closing sentence. Finally, you didn't have #5, who it is from(sincerely).
Ya, that is so not how you write an email!
Yes, it is!
Fine, then prove it!
Okay, this is how you, wrote the email- Yo whats up can you let me retake my test.
This is how you should have said it- Dear Mrs.Carry, I hope your day has been going well, I was wondering if I could retake that test on ch.34? Sincerely, Laura
Now you know how to write a proper email!
I guess you were right, next time I will do better, and I will redo the email I sent you.