One day there were three kids will, mike, and max they were having out one day just adventuring thought there neighbor hood. It was about ten o'clock and it was dark very dark outside and all the crickets were loud with the cracking leaves.Then all of a sudden they find a huge hole that had a bunch of vines in it.
Rising action / conflict
But all of the sudden, will blurted out "I want to go down there should I ?". "No you could get stuck and will not be able to get back out without help and I'm not going down there theres no way" max said. "But I just want to see what is down there, there could be gold or some treasure" max argue.
Then all of sudden, He jumps in but as soon he lands he rolls his ankle and starts crying. "oh no i told you not to go down there now you broke your ankle" "Well don't point the out the obvious and go help" max and mike argued. I told hime i wasn't going down there and I mean't what I said.
They sat there for hours and hours trying to find out how and what there going to do to get him out of the whole. after finally deciding they decided to get a rope and how him hang on to it while they pull the rope. So max went back to her house to get the rope.
she finally come back with the rope to pull him out.But then the find out that he couldn't move.So max had to pick him up and mike had to pull him all by his self it was hard but they figured out how to do it.
After they finally got him out they made sure his ankle was ok then they walked home and talked and max said "I told you" and after that they learned sometimes its good to listen to people advice.