Hey Mr.Bob, Hi! I wuz gone cuz my grandma was in the hospital and then cuz I wuz cryin alot, wich made my face red. So i didnt come the nex day CUZ I WUZ EMBARESED THAT MY FACE LOOKED BAD. BUT YOU NEV SENT ME THE NOTES THAT I MISSED! And I also didnt take the test LOL. So I will come in on thursday so I can take it. Please send the notes before then so i can study. Thanks. -Jane
Email Hey Bob,
This seems like they are very angry. They are demanding. She just assumed that she could come in anytime she wants.
This is not a good email. It is not good because when writing an email you should never use abbreviations or use all caps, there was not a subject line, they did not have correct grammar and spelling, they were not concise, had problems with their tone, and didn't use an appropriate salutation and closing.
Subject: Job Application Dear Mrs. Jones, Hi, I am Calvin Lassitter. I saw your ad for a job opening online. I am interested in the IT position.Below I have attached my resume to this email. I have experience in the IT world and would be grateful to have the opportunity to use my skills and develop them more. Sincerely, Calvin Lassitter
Dear Mrs. Jones
This is a very good email. They seem like a very professional and responsible person.
This is a good email. It is good because this person had a good subject line, a proper salutation and closing, they did not use abbreviations or all caps, they had correct spelling and grammar, they had a good tone, their writing seemed respectful and professional, and they were concise and to the point.