your hitting like a girl start hitting like yourself.
my book takes place in many areas like a baseball feild,a house a parking lot ect my main character is brian,hank,and brians dad cole.and it is in first person.
the problem in my story is if hank hits a homerun to win the game and tie the record.
great job hank
ya great job dude
brian helps hank train for the next big game where hank will try and hit the home run.
lets go detroit tigers.
lets break another record this year
Its finally the big game.Hank has to hit one more home run to beat the record and win the game.the first pitch is thrown,a ball to the outside.second pitch is a strike right on the top corner.the third pitch is thrown and whack hank nails it its gone!hank beat the record and won the game for the whole world series.
every body goes to hanks house and has a big party.
hank starts a new season and trys to break a new one this year for feilding and plays his first game of the year