Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. I understand I am young, but I still have some fantastic ideas for your park.
I just have a few changes for your cabins. And I definitely think these changes will catch the eyes of many families. You can start off by Changing the roof, new roofing looks cleaner. next you could paint the walls in the cabin, just to make the walls look fun. After that you should probably add full kitchens including an oven, stove, microwave, and full refrigerator and freezer. You could also add a nice fire-pit in all the cabin yards. Lastly, you could add different size cabins, so the large families aren't staying in such a small cabin.
This will be successful because Families will love the new look of these cabins and will want to stay there. These changes are very unique because there isn't many places with all of these add on's in there cabins.
These changes will allow more people to want to come to your cabins. This means your population will grow, so you will profit more.
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Sincerely, Lorali W And Mrs. Shelly magachey Oakdale lab 21 teacher