Foreshadow ¨What did you get?¨ asked my mom. ¨A hatchet,¨ I responded. ¨What!¨ Yelled my mom. ¨Give it now!¨ ¨NO!¨ I screamed. ¨Leave me alone!¨ ¨Who gave it to you?¨ She responded more calm. ¨Jack,¨ I said a little shy. ¨Who´s Jack?¨ asked my mom nervous. ¨Him.¨
Cliffhanger I was on a hike with my friends. The challenge was to see who can get to the top first. I didn't want to rush. So I just stayed behind. My friends were all ready at the top. They kept yelling at me to hurry up. So I started to run. It was drizzling out as well. I lost my balance here and there. I was fine though. I made it to the top, all my friends wanted me to see the view. So I stepped towards the edge. When I finally made it there. My friends surrounded me. I paused thinking to myself.
Suspense It was a normal day. No people talking, no birds chirping, and no cars driving. It was perfect. I sat down to watch a little telly. Then as soon as I was about to sit down, and eat 50 bags of Doritos. A strange noise came from my basement. It sounded like someone yelling. I grabbed my flashlight, and opened the basement door. As my cold feet went down the stairs one by one. My body felt more calm. I turned the flashlight around the corner. Then my heart stopped beating fast. I forgot that I kidnapped someone.
BY: Joseph Belpedio
Flashback I remembered the day he left. He said hes going to go buy milk. Then he never came back. I sat down in that same spot, everyday waiting for him. Then I realized he never would come back. Then my mom came into my room on the phone. I heard a familiar voice. It was my dad. He told me two things. One of them was your a BOT, and the other one is I would roast you but my mom told me not to burn trash anymore. Then he hung up.