Setting It was midday and the whole family was on a vacation on The bid island, Hawaii. They Going snorkeling on a small boat with 2 other families. The water was clear and you could see all of the fish and the captain on the boat promised a good trip.
Rising Action #1 The families reached the snorkeling spot after 30 minutes of cruising on the boat. There were tons of large fish you could see from the boat. The captain told the families to watch out for sharks in a joking way not knowing what would happen
Rising Action #2 All of the families were off the boat exploring the ocean and looking at the fish until a man noticed a very large fish and gathered everyone to look at it. There wasn't a very good view because the creature was under a rock. The creature stuck is pointy nose out and opened its mouth to show the rows of razor-sharp teeth. It was a shark!
Climax The shark viciously darted out from under the rock and sunk its rows of teeth into the man. The water filled with a cloudy dark red liquid. The shark continued to chase the man through the cove. The shark pumped its fin through the water and the man kicked as fast as he could.
Climax #2/Falling Action In the distance, a boat roared to life. The snorkeling boat was coming to pick us up. The engine shot through the water sending water flying. the shark continued to follow the man. The boat stopped in front of the man and the captain pulled him out of the water. The shark jumped up on board desperately trying to bight the man again.
Falling Action/ Resolution The man climbed on the boat and the shark ran swam away seeing that its prey had escaped. The captain had driven the boat back to the snorkel spot and picked the rest of the snorlelers up. He brought he the boat back to the dock and called an ambulance to tend to the man's wounds. The ambulance came and stitched up the mans hand. Every one was ok even theough it was a scary experience