1. The story started of with a stronger moment which will make the audience have anticipation of what will happen next, 2. At this moment Rainsford is probably a little nervous because he doesn't know if he is gonna get shot or not.3. This moment reveals that the character is better at handling harder situations.
3. This part of the story revealed that the character can act/think fast in tough situations.4. The conflict of him being sucked into the quicksand propelled the action of him violently tearing his feet free and trying his best to escape the general.5. The conflict creates suspense because you do not know if the quicksand will cause a major setback such as slowing him down completely.
1. This part of the story helps the audience understand how scared he is but knowing that he wants to keep a brave face for the game.3. This reveals the characters mental state of not wanting the enemy to figure out his true feelings.5. This creates suspense because you do not know if he will lose his nerve or keep it up to survive.