I think that the story is going to be about Oranges the fruit.
On a cold night during December a boy has tow oranges. He is going out with a girl and it is the first date. He goes to pick her up. They walk around the town then they go to the drugstore. He tells her that he is going to buy something for her. She picks something that costs a dime and he only has a nickel so he pays with an orange and walks her home. He ate the orange and she ate her chocolate and it was a good first date.
Negative Words- Cold, frost, gone, burned, a dog barked, hissing, fog, gray, fire Positive words- Smile, light, day, bright, breathing,
The tone of this poem is nervous at the start and happy at the end. The shift is at the end when he is walking her home and he says I took my girl's hand. The structure is freestyle/ No structure.
I still think that the title is about Oranges the fruit and it may be about the feeling of nervousness and love.
Love is a great thing you don't have to be nervous/ be yourself