I have been working here far too long without a raise. Give me money -Greg
BAD
I have greatly enjoyed working here at Big Company Inc. for the past 5 years and think it would be nice to get a raise. I am grateful to be a member of this company and can't wait to continue working here.-Greg
I would enjoy a raise
GOOD
BAD
I don't pity Greg as he no longer has a job.
I have been working here far too long without a raise. Give me money -Greg
GOOD
I will make sure Greg gets that raise.
Company Inc. for the past 5 years and think it would be nice to get a raise. I am grateful to be a member of this company and can't wait to continue working here.-Greg
