Low frequency lexis used because of how he is presented as only acting intelligent, not being it.Short., simple sentences for the same reason.
I think this is okay. He doesn't seem like he'll tell Daisy. That's the only reason I've brought him. Someone has to know and for some reason I trust him. I don't think he'll be the sort to judge.
Tom calls Myrtle dear - shows how he is more affectionate with her than with Daisy. He calls his actions into question but realises soon after he doesn't actually feel bad about it - 'how i feel' = how much he hates his relationship
Come on dear, let's get to ours. Do you want to pick up anything before we go back?
I think sometimes this is wrong. Then sometimes I remember how she makes me feel, and I don't. Not bad at all.
We'll stop at the news stand on the way back.
Tom gets angry how the man speaks to Myrtle Alude to an old incident where Tom lost his cool and did something g bad (trying to get away from the base text)
What kind do you want, lady?
It's a bitch. Here's your money. Go and buy ten more dogs with it.
Of course its one of them that's trying to rip us off. Good thing I'm too smart for that.