Oh I'm just updating my profile! I want to make sure that all of my friends can find me.
Hmmm... I think this could use some improvement.
Welcome to my page! I'm Ally Williams from Greenville, SC. I'm 14 & go to JL Mann High School.
POST DRAFT: What do you guys think about Crocs? I saw Maya wearing them last week and they looked SO UGLY! I think that everyone should throw them away and if you wear them, you're a loser.
I have some advice for you. I just learned about being responsible on the Internet and how to be a responsible digital citizen.
What's wrong with my account?
Also, don't post your personal information online. That's very unsafe and random people don't need to know your information. It's a good idea to have a private account and only accept people that you know.
Well I think the first thing you should know is that everything you put on the Internet is permanent. Good thing you didn't post that yet, because it would be a very negative thing to have connected to your digital footprint.
Thanks. I'll remember to treat everyone on the Internet with respect. I need to maintain a good reputation and that's how I would like to be treated.
This is much better! You only included your first name, and there's no other super personal information like your city, school, or age. You also deleted your post where you were being mean to someone, so your reputation is still protected and you're treating people with respect.
Welcome to my page! I'm Ally W. Some of my hobbies are drawing and playing soccer. If you follow me, you'll see some pictures of my art and my soccer games!
POSTED 2 MINS AGO: Hey guys. I just learned how to be safe on the Internet from my friend. I won't post any of my personal info and I'll be sure to be nice. Remember guys: whatever you post affects you forever.
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Thanks for giving me this advice. I know that I'll remember it whenever I go online