Neil and the ghost of Graylock

Neil  and the ghost of Graylock

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  • Graylock Hospital Neil goes into
  • I feel like someones watching us!
  • Nah, who cares, it might make this journey not boring.
  • Creepy noises are being heard 
  • What was that!!!
  • Probably a "Ghost".
  • A door locks them in
  • I feel really dizzy
  • Same
  • Josiah Rodriguez When Neil, his sister and friends enter Graylock they feel like there being watched. Neil did not care or simply just forgot when they said that. This definitely played a part in the story.
  • Neil finally finds his sister
  • Were the heck were you!!!
  •  In every room they look into, they encounter weird noises and things moving (chairs,bed sheets,etc). Neil still is not alarmed by this and shrugs it off by joking.
  • Neil sees a ghost 
  • While Neil's sister looks through a room, Neil and his friend Eric decide to look through ROOM 13. right when they step into the room they faint. Neil still is not alarmed by this, but is very cautious.   
  • Neil and friends run away 
  • I'm coming for you
  • Neil, Eric, and his sister finally decide to look at one more room and then leave. Neil, though is not that confident with what just occurred . He is now very alert and protective of what happens in the hospital. his sister on the other hand is terrified by what happened to his brother and friend. 
  • We just fainted and woke up just now.
  • When Neil and his sister go into another room They encounter the ghost of Nurse Janet. They frantically run out to meet with their friends. Neil is terrified by what just took place in that room and so is his sister.
  • What in in the world is that!!!!
  • Its a GHOST!!!!!
  • After they ran they finally met up with there friends in the woods (who left earlier) and told their story. Neil finally realized that if he was more attentive they might of evaded the situation. this is one of the many events in the book to change Neils way of thinking.
  • Lets get out of Here!!!!!
  • I should have been more attentive
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