im edger Allen Poe and i dont like the eye of the old man
the narrator introduces himself and he talks about how the eye of the old man bothered the narrator ''when ever it fell upon me my blood ran cold''
we had a call from the neighbor that they heared a loud noise
the narroraater goes into the old mans room to kill him ''i turned the latch of his door and opened it''
the narrator covers the old man with a pillow and then locks him in the floor ''in a instant i dragged him to the floor and pulled the heavy bed over him''
the police get to the narrators house to tell him that the neighbors called to tell they hear a loud noise ''a shriek had been heard by a neighbor during the night ''
the narrator hears the heart beat of the old man and its to much pressure that he confessed that he killed the old man ''vilians!'' i shreiked ''dissemble no more! i admit the deed!--tear up the plsanks!here, here --it is
i did it i killed the old man
i think the most suspenseful elements is when the narrator was looking at the old man because its really creepy that someones watching you