The word I am using is Savagely, this word means a fierce, violent, and uncontrolled manner. One synonym for the word savagely is brutaly. One antonym is civislied. A sentence using savagely is in 1818 he attacked Coleridge savagely in a maganzine that his son in law made for him .
I heard we have a new girl .
The main climax if my story is about a girl named Margot who moved to venus, Margot had moved from earth so on Venus the kids had bullied Margot because Margot said that she wrote a book about the sun and the other kids did not believe her but Margot has expierenced earth before they have not so they decided to bully her everday .
One of the themes from the text is when the kids bullied Margot while it was there free time on the playground some of the students had spit at Margot in the text it says that Margot started to look down at the floor and stare even when they told her to look up she stayed still and then they gave a shovel and told her to hold on to it and maybe she will move and this was one of the theme's.
You don't know what the sun looks like, but you know that your a liar . What are you going to do know cry little baby.
One external conflict in the story is when the bad children throws Margot into the closet and listen to her cry and slam gainst the door because it was dark and it was down in a dark scary quite cage after Margt cried and slam aginst the door the teacher came back and then they left Margot in the cage.
Go inside the door missy.
After all the sun finally came out after Margot asked herself why the other children do not know what the sun looks like, and she realized that the sun does not really come out a lot so then the planet started to shake and it was the sun but 5 seconds later the rain came back I think the author put this in the story to let the kids kow that the sun is real
The sun is real Margot was right but know it's raining
See the sun is real.
The main clonfict of this story was to let people knoe not to judge someone that quick because you never know if there actually right in this story the kids forgot about the sun so then Margot finally got her proof when the sun came out.