I am reflecting on my Cacao dustry Persuasive Letter - Writing Summative
I didn’t know anything about the dark side of chocolates, or fairtrade. I only knew that chocolates are delicious, I have never even really thought about the workers before this unit.
I have done a similar kind of work (writing letters), in my old school, writing about my future plan for middle school. But it isn’t the same as this, because here, I need to take a lot of notes, I learned a lot, and I need put the down what I learned and the thoughts I have into a letter, also making it sound persuasive.
I need to improve upon my vocabulary. I think I can use harder vocabulary words to improve my writing skills. I can also use more Cohesive devises to connect my writings together and make things have a comfortable and natural fluency, leading the reader through the writing like a fluent river.
I encountered problems like I just came in Ms.Chelsea’s class not long ago, and this is my first Phase 4 writing summative, it is kind of different from Phase 3, so I need to fit in quickly and Show myself and my writing well inside this summative, and I need to try to fit in as fast as possible.