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I was damn near bawling, I felt so damn happy, if you want to know the truth. I don't know why. It was just that she looked so damn nice, the way she kept going around and around, in her blue coat and all. God, I wish you could've been there.
I was able to convince Phoebe to go back to school, she looked so damn beautiful while holding my hand."Promise me you'll go back home, please?" old Phoebe said. God that word depressed the hell out of me."Yea I promise, but you have to promise me you'll stay in school, okay?" "Okay I will, I promise."
What I thought I'd do was going to run away after I left Phoebe in school and leave a note saying how I'll live far away in the west and to not worry about me because I'll be the catcher in the rye and all, but what I did was I walked back home. I was feeling funny as hell for some reason and I was starting to feel hungry too, but I didn't want to spend the rest of Phoebe's dough on food.
It was still raining like hell, I was drenched but I didn't care. I was starting to think about how Mr.Antolini was patting my head, it made me feel nervous as hell, that goddamn flit. I decided to take a few blows before entering the apartment, I was getting a little yellow. What I thought I'd do was hit the bull with my mom for a while, then I'd tell her how I met this girl I would move in with and get a job.
When I entered the room she had on this blue dress that made her look phony but less nervous, I was happy to see her I guess. I felt nervous as hell for some reason. I thought she would kick me out and never let me see Phoebe again. I don't what the hell happened next but when I went in to hug her I started to uncontrollably cry in her arms, I will never forget that.
I remember her voice fading away, I think she said everything was going to be okay, but I didn't know what the hell she meant. I couldn't see anymore, I felt my head hit the goddamn floor so hard it almost busted open. I felt like I was in a goddamn movie because I couldn't move so I started to pretend I was dying. Then I started to hear Allie's voice, he said I would be okay too, but I still couldn't understand.
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