Lily Webb is leaving school to get on the and go home she looks very sad. I have used a long shot with only her facing the camera to get the audiences attention on her.
Lily Webb is now sat on the bus you can see her getting increasingly sad, I have included another person to show he is happy and fine to let the audience know it is something personal and that the school isn't bad.
Lily Webb has got off the bus and is walking home. She arrives outside her house and we can see her father shouting at her out the window she starts to cry and the audience notices the state the house is in and the viewer becomes curious on what her dad is shouting about and why their house is in bad condition.