The sniper shot down another sniper off a building rooftop.
Who... was that?
The Lifeless Body
The sniper made his way down the rooftop he was on and went to go investigate the body in curiosity.
PEW PEW PEW!
After the sniper investigated the body, he then realized that it was his brother...
Liam O'Flaherty gives the story atmosphere by using a description of sounds and surroundings, and characterizes a cold blooded sniper with curiosity. "He felt a sudden curiosity of who the sniper he killed was, he thought the enemy was a good sniper. He wondered if he knew him."
O'Faherty shows some realism and gives detail about the way the antagonist's limp body falls. "The dying man on the roof crumpled up and fell forward. The body turned over and over in place until it hit the concrete with a thud."
O'Flaherty shows some more characterization and realism to give the protagonist sniper more depressing emotions. "The sniper threw himself face forward beside the corpse. Then he turned over the dead body and sees his brothers face."