I don't seem to be making any money with this book
SCENE 1 -B
Why not talk to your publisher about it?
I edited a lot of the book so..I deserve a lot of credit.
SCENE 2 - A
He said he took the credit and I need to write another story that's even better.
Guess you better get to work then. I'll help
Elly is sadly talking to Dylan in a coffee shop, about how upset she is as she hasn't made much money off of the recent book she got published. She wants to go to Japan but needs enough money to do so. Dylan suggests she go to her editor Keith, and Elly agrees. She gets up and goes to call Keith, telling Dylan to pay for her probably 7 cups of coffee
SCENE 2 - B
We gotta go!!!
Elly walks to the other side of the building to call Keith and talks to him about why she only made $48 off of her book. He states that he edited so much of the book that he deserves most of the credit. The book gives most credit to Keith and only a little credit to Elly. He says if she makes a good enough book he won't do it, and she'll make more money.
SCENE 3 - A
I finished the story!!!!
Elly talks with Dylan about how she has to write a new story. They decide to write some random fairy tale parody. They spend the week writing the story, it is very difficult..
SCENE 4 - A
and now I have enough money to go to Japan!!
Elly and Dylan wake up the day of the deadline and panic. Grabbing the papers that started flying. Elly sprints out the door with Dylan following behind.
Elly reached Keith just in time and he looks through the story. He thinks it could be better but it looks like they tried really hard so he'll edit it only a bit and get it published. Elly and Dylan are very relieved.
then, Elly and Dylan, sitting in the coffee shop again, talk about how she can go to Japan now, since people like her book. Dylan is a little sad about Elly leaving but they have Skype. Dylan gives her a goodbye hug before she leaves the coffee shop. The End :000