I don't know if this is better, but I hope i'll get a better grade.
Weather pick-a-project 1st period Chrystian Chapman
Welcome to my show, storm watchers.I'm your host, mike.I'm here by the pacific ocean watching a powerful hurricane form.
I can see the warm air swirling up and the warm water is evaporating upwards.The city looks like it's flooding. There are also heavy winds blowing in.
This hurricane looks like it's going to be a category 4. My anemometer says that the hurricane has a wind speed of 142mph, and my thermometer says the water tempurture is 93 degrees farenheit.
The storm is the size of Haiti, which is half the size of The Great Galveston. The most destructive hurricane in georgia was called the 1898 Georgia hurricane, and it was the most because it had record storm surge flooding.
The hurricane has gotten to it's largest form, so I should get going.The wind is getting very strong. Mike out.