You did really well, but just work on the basics! Overall, it wasgood!
Thank you for this trophy! I apperiacte this so much!
After, I nodded and waved goodbye to my friends and got a burst of confidence, and walked toward the stage, where the music began to play.
THE ROAD BACK
Then, the music began to play and I began to dance with the beat of the music and listened to the rhythm. After I had finished, the judges gave me good feedback and told that I had danced very well.
THE RENEWAL / LAST TEST
I was thinking, we should give our brother the candy we got!
After finishing up the performance, I received a trophy for being able to perform in the competition. Happy with the results, I excitedly told my father and sister and my friends decided to take my sister and I out for dinner.
RETURN WITH THE PRIZE
After we finished dinner, everyone headed home to tell the good news of both my sister and me performing. Headed back, we realized that our brother would be envious of both of us achieving something, and him nothing, so we had to figure what to do to for him.
Next, my sister and I decided to give him the candy we had received from the competition, as he was someone who loved anything sweet. We piled up all of the sweets into a bag and decided to give it to him when we arrived home.
I agree! Good idea!
Finally, when we arrived home, we gave our brother the bag of candy, which he was satisfied with, and revealed our trophies to my grandmother. She told both of us that she was proud and was very happy that we came that far.