on the rainy river

on the rainy river
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  • is war really the best way to peace? I believe that we shouldn't be fighting but using our words
  • Exposition
  • for example, i am the last person you would want to go to war because mainly i cant even make the difference between a slingshot and a gun
  • if you read my papers you'll understand the consequences of war and how it is a non finishing loop
  • those are the people that got drafted for the war why am I in the list I clearly stated i was against it
  • Conflict
  • I cant go to the war! its not for me! i have to find a way out! canada ain't that far i can head for there 
  • nothing its the news around the world I'm just reading about, nothing special
  • whats going on son? you seemed troubled
  • It may be an old lodge, but elroy berdahi's hospitality has been the best
  • Rising action
  • work around the lodge, sure!
  • dont worry ill get started with outside
  • it's not.. about..
  • he has been great for the little work around the house but he will have to face reality.. i should tell him
  • you.. you're.. let's...
  • this wasn't the first scene, but it was the first time taking a stand towards what he believed in and it is what will bring this story to its climax
  • Climax
  • canada is not that far, all i have to do is jump and reach the shore and ill be freed from the war
  • he'll find peace on his decision here now that the two option are played out
  • finding out that he had been drafted for the war, is what started as the conflict
  • Falling action
  • drive safe and I hope you come back so you can come and visit me if I'm still alive 
  • he had ran away and the owner of  the lodge mr. elroy knew the circumstances but never said a word and let Tim figure out by himself because he knew that if he had said something, Tim's decision wouldn't of been rational.
  • resolution
  • I'm going and i want you guys to know that I am doing it for you guys
  • if only my complex sentences weren't so complex
  • I can't, I can't do it, I dont want to be seen as a coward and failure to my hometown and my country. im going back
  • mr. Elroy brought Tim to go fishing on the water to go across canada but only moving slowly letting the boat coast towards the Canadian shore, forcing Tim to think about what he was going to do which in the end let Tim think of the right choice to make .
  • this scene wasn't written as such, the story says that the Tim waited for Elroy but he had been long gone so he had left the money for the night he had spent and returned home 
  • i'll do my best to stay alive
  • Tim had gone to war, and came back, but for him it wasn't a happy ending because it wasn't what he had believe in in the first place.
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