Hi, I am a student from Oakdale Middle school. Thank you for your time and interest into my idea to making your park an amazing success. You won’t be sorry. This will change your resorts lifespan, your career, and even your life!
With all the new technology, like phones and wireless headphones, amusement parks are being left behind and are a thing of the past.
But now, I have an idea that will make your park the next big thing! You will have a big hotel in the back of the park, with a view of the whole park. As a deck, there will be a sunroom with a view of the whole park. This hotel will have 2 indoor pools and 1 outdoor pool with a hot tub to the side for each pool. There will be so many pools, it will be less cramped in one pool, and more people will come because of that. On the roof of the hotel, will be a ride that tips you directly downward to the ground. On the sides of the hotel, there will be a tubed slide that goes under the sunrooms to the bottom. A fun way to get to the bottom instead of a elevator.
When people see your new hotel, many more people will come and your park will make you a lot of money. The hotel has a ride on top of the building-only one other park has this, and it is not in the East Coast. The hotel has a sunroom in the view part of every room-no other park in the world has this!
Once the hotel is built, or transformed from the old hotel, you will be making a lot more money because a lot more people will come. If you build it off the old hotel, you will be saving a lot of time and money and will be using less trees. You can save the environment and at the same time make more money. Less trees will be torn down.
Again, thank you for your time and interest into my idea. You wont regret it. Come see as soon as possible!