Emily, I graded your paper and I thik you should work on trying harder.
Im sorry! I'm not good at writing papers, it's too hard.
Why didn't you come to me I'm your teacher? I'm here to help you when you struggle
How can you help me?
There are many different ways to improve your writing. Look at some of the revisions I did on your paper and try to learn from your past mistakes. There are going to be different types of papers that you are better at.
My English paper
The next English paper assignment
Emily guess what? you got an A on your creative writing paper!
WOW thats amazing!
Thank you for helping me. Next time I will ask for help when I need it.