Thank you so much for taking time out of your day to watch this video I worked hard on to make, I hope you enjoy.
I would like to fix up some of the rides and make the park overall look cleaner. I think this would benifit your park because it would draw more customers attention.
It will make your park more succesful because it will make your park look more modern because right now it looks kind of old and beat up. It will be unique because no other park will be willing to make the chnages nessecary to have a seccsesful park.
This will make your park more successful because more people will come and you will make more money. It will also tell them that you actually care about your park and update it. It will benefit the area because more people will go to that area and go to restaurants and hotels in that area.
Thank you for the time to watch this video I hope you enjoyed and this will persuade you to make some changes. Sincerely, Jake