Wow, all of the spelling and grammar in this email is perfect!
Do: Be Polite
"I greatly appreciated that you took the time to interview me for the job..." How polite!
Do: Be as Short and to the Point as You Can Be
"Dear Mr. Stan, I didn't quite understand the homework and was wondering if I could make an appointment with you for help. I am available whenever. Steve, Lakewood High School student." Short and to the point!
Don't: Use Abbreviations or Text Slang
What the heck does "rofl" mean?
Don't: Send Spam Emails or Rude Emails
"Forward this email or suffer the consequences," yeah right...
Don't: Include Unnecessary Information
Why did they tell me about their family history of high blood pressure in this job application?