A good short story
Character: A shopkeeper and two Friends ( Mia & Kate) and a robber
Setting: Town & shop
Cause of affect. The robber stole an expensive watch and the latest camera. Mia was kidnap, while Kate got the shopkeeper.
1. Kate’s mum drops Mia and Kate off.
2. Mia and Kate walk toward the shop door
3. They enter the shop, they walk to the candy aisle
4. A black Toyota parks
5.then drives past.
6.A man with a big green coat gets out.
7.the man stomps toward the shop
8. The man enter the shop
9. Mia and Kate walk to the newest area
11. Kate looks at all the jewels
12. Mia looks at the camera, iPhone and laptops
12. Kate and Mia wonder over the the book aisle
13. Kate and Mia were reading some of the books
14. The man appears in the newest aisle
15. Mia looked at the men through the self
16. The man grabs the camera
17. The man approach’s another aisle
18. Mia spotted him
19. Mia tells Kate
20. The shopkeeper was busy
21.Kate finally tells the shopkeeper
22. The shopkeeper and Kate remained in the newest aisle
23. Kate runs to tell Mia
24.Kate and the shopkeeper are in the newest aisle
25.Kate stresses about Mia disappearing
26. Kate tells the shopkeeper what Mia looks like,
Kate spotted Mia and tells the shopkeeper
27. Mia been dragged down the street by the robber
28.Kate’s mum comes backs from work (police officer)
29. Kate run toward the robber
Kate argues with the robber
30. Kate kicks the robber
31. Mia bites the robber
32. The robber gets a knife and cuts Mia
33. Kate’s mum arrested the robber
Kate and Mia were dropped off at a shop, Mia spotted someone grabbing expensive things, she tells Kate they walk toward the robber. they hided behind the aisle and watched the robber, the robber walks out of the shop. Kate was trying to tell the shopkeeper but he was very busy with the customers. Mia run out ...