It’s good, but it needs some work. For a children’s book it’s a little long so make sure it is less than two hundred words, and remember 1st graders and kindergarteners don’t have that big of a vocabulary. I also want these characters to a have a little more interest.
I’ll try and we will see what I come up with.
I took all of your advice and I think this is a winner!
This book is amazing! I’m so proud, now the little ones can finally read it!
You have inspired me so much!
I can’t wait to go show my mom and read this book!
“The sun did not shine. It was too wet to play. So we sat in house. All that cold, cold, wet day.”