StoryBoard Amuse Me

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For My Wevideo in Lab21

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  • Hi, and I'm Julian, this is to the manager and/ or boss of the Idle-wild & Soak zone Amusement Park. I would like to thank you for taking the time out of your day to watch this presentation. I want to make your amusement park more financially successful than it was before.
  • I am nowhere near expecting you to accept these Ideas, they are only recommendations. 
  • Rickey's Racers is a small kiddie ride that could use some minor upgrades. You can take the seat-belts off to easily, so I recommend having it only being unlocked by a key. You could also give the cart you ride in a theme to look exiting. You should also make the ride so your able to turn. It can happen automatically, the children could do it, just make it turn. You should also add fences around it, we aint want no on the run children. You should also make it so other than kids could ride it.
  • Paul Bunyan's login toboggan diffidently needs some work.  You should make it so you don't get as wet. You should also add seat-belts for you know, safety. You should also make the rails bigger so you don't fall off the track. You should also make it so less pressure is being put on your body. You should also make the boat stop at the end.
  • In the tunnel crawl, if the net breaks, there is nothing to break a fall under, It's also just crawling through a net, make it more than just a tunnel crawl.  There are also no size or age requirements. There are no quantity of people requirements eather, especially how its only being held up by two slabs of wood. And it is also very short, make it long and treacherous to give a sense of adventure. 
  • I would like to thank you for watching this , I hope you take the time to think about these recommendations. And I hope you enjoyed watching this. Thank you again!
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