Okay. Well first of all lets look at your beggining. The first thing that is wrong you don't have a Greeting or opening sentance
I said,Dear Mrs. Clark. I have been a home all week with strep throat. And missed a lot of your class. Ava Bradford is in your third hour. Can she bring me my homework? So I can be caught up when I return.
Well my advice would still be to retype the email because you don't know if you be going back on Monday. I will help you retype the email if you need help.
Okay well. How can I fix? I don't want to retype the email and I don't want to wait for Monday to talk to her.
Well let's start with this. Dear Mrs.Clark, Good Morning. I have been missing from your class these pat couple weeks with strep throat and don't know when I will be able to return.
Okay thanks for the help. I think I need to come up with some of it on my own.
Alright lets start with this. Ava Bradford is in your third hour she is my neighbor. Can you please send her home with my work? So I can be all caught up when I get back. Please let me know if that is possible. Sincerely,Rebecca
That sounds great. Also that is the correct way to type an email. Good job Rebecca