Action Words: falling backwards I splash in to the pool
Go Jayden!;said dad yelling at me.
senses:I feel positive hot
Paragraph 2: Getting in the water As I stood at the side of the pool, I hold my nose. I was getting ready to make a splash. I was scratching my head because of the bright hot sun. Standing backwards, I fell into the pool. Splash. The warm water goes on top of me. I felt positive because the sun was not bothering me and I knew I was going to