How Ive Changed

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  • In high school, my brain felt overwhelmed with all the information I had to remember. 
  • .....SO i took my professors advice.....
  • "In college I am going to learn so muuuchhhhhhhh, goshhh I am already tired! But at least Ill be able to fulfill my dream of writing."
  • I got to college and realized something SO great. I realized that Im going to expand on what I do know about writing and learn even better techniques for my writing! I met professor Brehler, who taught me the real way to write. High school is just for beginners and my brain was just STARTING to be overwhelmed with info.
  • Then came along Project 1, where i got 43 points out of 50. Professor B told me to work on a clearer academic voice and also work on practicing outlining, so that my writing can have more and better structure to it. 
  • ...and suddenly there was a change!
  • I figured it out, and decided to do lots of outlining and planning before writing alot of my pieces. I began to understand the steps of writing for example, having a shitty rough draft is PERFECT to make a great essay. Getting all of your ideas out on paper is the very first step, whether thats a first draft or section work, to focus on paragraph by paragraph. Before college came, I never thought outlining would be an important roll in writing.
  • Project 3 came rolling around, and I was asked to do an outline, 1st rough draft and 2nd rough draft, and then a finished product. I took this very seriously and really thought about how I would write my essay, for it to be structured with details. Professor B said I did a great job, just to keep working on my organization.  I tried... And tried...
  • I had to analyze a music video, putting a nice detailed essay together. I got a 163 out of 200. I feel like my paragraphs still need some work, but analyzing was great for me. I am improving on my writing skills and still learning new techniques.  Thank you MRS. Professor Brehler!!!!
  • PROJECT 4 came to find its way into my life, and i was determined for a change!
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