Dear Palace Entertainment, I would like to help you improve you park to make it glisten. I am fixing dukes lagoon , shows and some rides.
Thank you, for reading this letter and your interest in it. My name is Kylie S. This is a class project at Oakdale and i think it will really help improve your park.
With this upgrade I will help you to improve your money stance. If you were to add more water slides to your park more people would be coming to enjoy the amazing entertainment.come with me on a journey to help improve your park.
My idea is unique because it is different then most, this would help you be more successful. This is because more people will come and it will spread the word about all the awesome slides you just put in. If you invest you will sure be happy with the outcome.
Thank you, for your time. To listen to my video I made for you click the like. Hope you enjoyed all the changes I suggested.