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If you're anything like Linda, you probably HATE when the teacher makes you revise your paper.
Revise your papers!!!!
All she seems to do is change a sentence or two - like I'm sure you do - but can never figure out how to maker her paper sound any better than before.
What am I doing wrong??
But, what Linda did not know is that merely changing sentences here and there does essentially nothing to help revise a paper if there is no rhetorical intent behind it!
How do I do this, Mom?
This isn't how you revise, silly!
Linda must look at her paper as a whole and worry about aspects such as rhetorical choices and tone.
This is how you revise papers.
Only then can Linda improve the quality of her paper and develop more advanced writing skills for future papers and revisions.
Good revision work being done on this computer :)
With Linda's newly found skills, she is able to properly revise her papers with ease and receive back a great grade!
Thanks! I finally figured it out!
Good revision work, Linda!
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