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revision
Updated: 12/12/2018
revision
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Storyboard Text

  • If you're anything like Linda, you probably HATE when the teacher makes you revise your paper. 
  • Revise your papers!!!!
  • C
  • All she seems to do is change a sentence or two - like I'm sure you do - but can never figure out how to maker her paper sound any better than before.
  • What am I doing wrong??
  • C
  • But, what Linda did not know is that merely changing sentences here and there does essentially nothing to help revise a paper if there is no rhetorical intent behind it!
  • How do I do this, Mom?
  • This isn't how you revise, silly!
  • C
  • Linda must look at her paper as a whole and worry about aspects such as rhetorical choices and tone.
  • This is how you revise papers.
  • C
  • Only then can Linda improve the quality of her paper and develop more advanced writing skills for future papers and revisions.
  • Good revision work being done on this computer :)
  • With Linda's newly found skills, she is able to properly revise her papers with ease and receive back a great grade!
  • Thanks! I finally figured it out!
  • Good revision work, Linda!
  • A+
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