Hey, James, I wrote an email to Mr.Bob about any assignments I missed during my vacation. But I am not sure if I was writing wrong. I said ¨Dear Mr.Bob, Can you send me any assignments.¨ Am I missing something??
Well, you did well with Dear, Mr.Bob, You are missing ¨ Greeting or opening sentence. You got your body sentence but you are missing your closing sentence like thank you or have a nice day. Then you need to add sincerely, whoever.
Thanks, James I thought about this ¨ Dear Mr. Bob How are you doing. I was on vacation last week and I came back today. Did I miss any assignments when I was gone? If I did can you please send me the assignments. Thank You Sincerely, Sarah.