Johnas found out his father killed a baby and feelt upset. "He killed it! My father killed it! Jonas said to himself, stunned at what he realizing. He contnued to stare at the screen numbly."
Refusal of the Return
"I WON'T! I WON'T go home! You can't make me!"
Jonas didn't want to go home after what he saw his father do. "Jonas felt a ripping sensation inside himself, the feeling of terrible pain clawing its way forward to emerge in a cry"
The Magic Flight
"Then, In the middle of the night before the Ceremony, Jonas would secretly leave his dwelling."
Jonas leves the comunity at the night and takes Gabe cuz they were going to kill gabe.
"Even I voted for Gabriel's release when we had the meeting this afternoon." "First thing tomorrow morning."
Rescue from Without
Jonas uses his last memories for gabreal. "He pressed his hands into Gabriel's back and tried to remember sunshine. Then it flickered suddenly, and he felt tiny tongues of heat begin to creep across and into his frozen feet and legs."
The crossing or Return Threshold
Jonas Dies. "Behind him, across vast distances of space and time, from the place he had left, he thought he heard music too. But perhaps it was only an echo."
Rebecca Radko ,Rebecca Radko
I didn't add colore come in until he gets the memorie of colores. I used certant scenes to explain the place it takes place and when. I used sertant shots to empisize the way he fells and used close ups to ex-out the sroundying to focus on that they are saying and used wide shots to show how big everything was comparied to him.